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Turn To Snow by Dark-Remorse Turn To Snow by Dark-Remorse
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Lost, alone, she turns to snow...


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Damn hair - I can never blend hair properly into a background. Sorry about that.

Hmm, other than my critique, think of this how you wish :heart:
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:iconwhateverwinnie:
Very interesting idea for a photomanipulation, and very good choice of photographs. However, there is still room for improvement.

My comments/suggestions for improvement:
1. Increase the contrast of the girl slightly. Just slightly. This is because the background has a very high contrast (the tree and the snow), whereas the contrast on the girl is a little weak. This made the cut-and-paste look a little obvious.
2. Model accidentally distorted during resizing. This is a common problem when photomanipulators accidentally distort the photo when they're resizing it. It seems to me that the model has been elongated vertically, making her look awkwardly skinny. Try resizing the original again, or stretch it a little horizontally.
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Toria17 Jul 31, 2009   Digital Artist
Very Pretty
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Dark-Remorse Aug 12, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
:love: I'm happy that you like it
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Toria17 Aug 12, 2009   Digital Artist
yeah! x
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AsiaBreen Apr 21, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
I love the desolate feeling of loneliness it portrays xD
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Dark-Remorse Apr 23, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
=) I'm glad you do
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AsiaBreen Apr 24, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
:)
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:iconnirelleth:
Very pretty composition!
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Dark-Remorse Feb 27, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :D
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:iconmrs-dani-filth-stock:
lovely piece thanx for using my stock:hug:
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Dark-Remorse Feb 6, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
:heart: No problem :D Thank you for uploading it! :hug:
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